quinta-feira, setembro 17, 2009

Carolina's compositio

É de suma importância que o aluno saiba utilizar seu vocabulário de forma correta, afim de treinar sua escrita e se expressar através de uma composition (redação).
Parabéns à aluna Carolina Alexandra - BOOK 2, pela excelente redação feita no dia September 16th, 2009.







The inequality social is a big problem in the world. Charlie is a victim of this problem, he is a poor man and he doesn't have a house but he has many friends: The birds, the squirrels and his old dog Prince. He is happy, because he has friends.
Donald is a rich man and he isn't the victim of that problem, he has a house and a bed to sleep, but Is he happy? Beats me!
Donald has a good heart because he tried to help Charlie, but Charlie is happy with what he has. His friends make him happy. Donald in the beginning didn't understand why Charlie didn't stay at Plaza Hotel, but then Donald understood.
The most valuable of the life is the love that we keep in the heart.


Carolina Alexandra.



2 Comments:

  1. Carolina Alexandra said...
    Hum... Thank you, teacher! ♥
    Vou procurar sempre dar o melhor.
    "A única pessoa que pode conseguir fazer você alcançar algo, é você mesmo!"

    bye bye.

    Carolina Alexandra.
    Jucymara said...
    Good composition..
    Congratulations Carol!
    =)

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